"Genetically they're twins" confuses me, because it implies identical twins, but Eva and Lilly don't look the same. If you meant them to be fraternal twins I would word that differently.
That wasn't the point of the comment. They meant that they were twins but nothing alike. Clearly they aren't identical twins as they aren't identical. I believe the comment was more like "they may have the same Gene's but they couldn't be more different". Also, if you're gonna post every single grammatical error, maybe you should just send a message to the creator listing them instead of filling up the entire page with individual mistakes.
I meant similar Genes, like siblings would have. However, it is possible that they are monozygotic twins because the only thing I noticed really different was the hair color, could just be dyed (which usually happens with identical twins as they want to differentiate themselves). Either way, my point was I got the point of the statement which was to say the two sisters were polar opposites.
I debated whether to even post this one, but while "dampening all frequencies" isn't incorrect, this idea would usually be expressed as "jamming all frequencies". Based on previous writing I assume you are ESL and might not have heard this expression in English, but if I'm wrong or you don't want feedback like this feel free to let me know.
Thanks a lot for all the corrections! I'll have a look into the twin issue. Frequency dampening is a thing, I think, but I'm not sure it applies to communications, so I'm going to go with your suggestion. English is indeed my second language, so if you spot more of these I'd be happy to know about them.
Ok now I've played it... So far it's fucking brilliant... Definitely want to see a whole lot more soon, can't wait to have my own space Harem and the story so far is definitely Gripping.
So far the only suggestion/ feedback that I have is that In the future updates if possible I want to see a little more focus on the Animation during NSFW scene's, I find that it definitely helps when there are a few more frames of Animations that help to smooth out the motion and feels less like a bad frame rate from a FPS game otherwise I love everything so far... I just want to see more sexy smooth animations, not saying add more sex scenes but just a little more put into it
Thats me looking from the standpoint of someone who has high standards so if you can't or don't make those adjustments that's fine I'll still love this game from what I have seen... Phenomenal job mate.
Thanks a lot, really glad you liked it! On what hardware are you playing the game? The animations are smooth on my end, but maybe there's something else going on that prevents playback in some way.
They're probably an Amazonian culture that kidnapped my Sister. They'll likely try to indoctrinate her and she'll be safe until I rescue her. The message for the Commander is probably that "She can go Fuck herself for not rescuing my sister immediately and damning orders to Hell." Well Perverteer. That's a Hell of a temporary stop point.... So Far Fucking A+++.
A friendship tracker might be a good idea in a future update. There are no points this time, but it might be nice to have an overview of the girls you're in a relationship with.
Agreed Perverteer. How your girls feel about you is a pretty Critical bit of information when the Entire Story revolves around building a relationship with them (ass-orted sex scenes being of secondary import)...
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Looks interesting but I haven't gotten too far yet!
Correction: "it's share" should be "its share". (Possessive its doesn't have an apostrophe - yes this is a crazy exception.)
"Genetically they're twins" confuses me, because it implies identical twins, but Eva and Lilly don't look the same. If you meant them to be fraternal twins I would word that differently.
That wasn't the point of the comment. They meant that they were twins but nothing alike. Clearly they aren't identical twins as they aren't identical. I believe the comment was more like "they may have the same Gene's but they couldn't be more different". Also, if you're gonna post every single grammatical error, maybe you should just send a message to the creator listing them instead of filling up the entire page with individual mistakes.
If they are fraternal twins they *don't* have the same genes, that's why the statement is misleading.
I meant similar Genes, like siblings would have. However, it is possible that they are monozygotic twins because the only thing I noticed really different was the hair color, could just be dyed (which usually happens with identical twins as they want to differentiate themselves). Either way, my point was I got the point of the statement which was to say the two sisters were polar opposites.
Minor quibble, but "athletics meant, I often" should not have a comma.
"about what do next" should be "about what to do next".
"the Kit and Celine's tent" should be "Kit and Celine's tent".
"when the finally joined" should be "when they finally joined".
"grief for these" should be "grieve for these".
I debated whether to even post this one, but while "dampening all frequencies" isn't incorrect, this idea would usually be expressed as "jamming all frequencies". Based on previous writing I assume you are ESL and might not have heard this expression in English, but if I'm wrong or you don't want feedback like this feel free to let me know.
"Despite that fact that" should be "Despite the fact that".
"alleviate of the tension" should be "alleviate the tension".
"will come in firing" should be "comes into firing" and "shot upon" should be "fired upon".
"shoot as us" should be "shoot at us"
Thanks a lot for all the corrections! I'll have a look into the twin issue. Frequency dampening is a thing, I think, but I'm not sure it applies to communications, so I'm going to go with your suggestion. English is indeed my second language, so if you spot more of these I'd be happy to know about them.
Ok now I've played it... So far it's fucking brilliant... Definitely want to see a whole lot more soon, can't wait to have my own space Harem and the story so far is definitely Gripping.
So far the only suggestion/ feedback that I have is that In the future updates if possible I want to see a little more focus on the Animation during NSFW scene's, I find that it definitely helps when there are a few more frames of Animations that help to smooth out the motion and feels less like a bad frame rate from a FPS game otherwise I love everything so far... I just want to see more sexy smooth animations, not saying add more sex scenes but just a little more put into it
Thats me looking from the standpoint of someone who has high standards so if you can't or don't make those adjustments that's fine I'll still love this game from what I have seen... Phenomenal job mate.
Thanks a lot, really glad you liked it! On what hardware are you playing the game? The animations are smooth on my end, but maybe there's something else going on that prevents playback in some way.
Has a Star Wars look! Can't wait to try it. Hmmmm. No relationship tracker screen? Lust, Trust, Friendship?
They're probably an Amazonian culture that kidnapped my Sister. They'll likely try to indoctrinate her and she'll be safe until I rescue her. The message for the Commander is probably that "She can go Fuck herself for not rescuing my sister immediately and damning orders to Hell." Well Perverteer. That's a Hell of a temporary stop point.... So Far Fucking A+++.
A friendship tracker might be a good idea in a future update. There are no points this time, but it might be nice to have an overview of the girls you're in a relationship with.
Thanks for the glowing review!
Agreed Perverteer. How your girls feel about you is a pretty Critical bit of information when the Entire Story revolves around building a relationship with them (ass-orted sex scenes being of secondary import)...