went for any girl i found and yeah actually made so burned out like atleast 15 characters in totals with most going atleast twice ... lol personally loved some of the setting and choices you got. especially revenge on dwayne ... with the m.. yeah also like many say i really liked bella the most and all other character in their own way for some reason really liked arianna maybe i am just a sadist... lol but yea was fun with irony on taking the wife for a certain character lol
last note: actually understand why you put so many girls. for example you wanted to build the sisters first so they actually was worth it or something and not easy. so you basically made filler characters or chances if you wanna be or precise to actually get sex (adult novel duh) as a completist i kind go for harem and playboy...well
First of all I want to congratulate you for the artstyle and writting; I've played quite a lot of adult games and this one is one of the few I actually care about the dialogues instead of pressing skip. I've found myself laughing in real life with the comments or thoughts of the MC. The girls are also very well written, in other games, it seems that all of them have the same personality (or don't have any at all) but in this one each girl has a very characteristic and very cool personality. In particular, I fell in love with Bella, the relationship she has with the MC is as if they were a couple in real life, the bond they develop is wonderful, for example, when they exchange playful insults in bed, or when the MC ruins the surprise and Bella begins to "narrate" what she would've done, and in the end the MC ends up saying "luckyly you are a very evocative storyteller" haha! they're perfect for each other, they're both such smartasses. I got so involved with Bella that in the scene after the forest when she stares at you on the couch and starts to cry, I almost hug the monitor. And when I saw her try on the wedding dresses I almost started to cry, I don't know if you “touched” her character model but at first she seemed to me very "meh" and then (probably because my perception changed) she became the most beautiful girl of the whole game, that beautiful face and dat ass ... daaaammn. I love that deep down she's a romantic and very shy (you have to "work" hard to get her to open) but in the end everything is worth it. My canon is a playthrough with only her (and pregnant of course). I really love her.
Another one that I like (although not as much as Bella) is Rachel, she's very cute, playfull and kinky (so far she's the only one willing to try anal! Go go Rachel!), her romance is very fun. On the other hand, I don't care in the slightest about Liza; and Susan is interesting especially in the Discreet part. I liked that you have opted for stills rather than animations, if at some point you get to include them, it'd be good if they have text, I've seen other games with empty animations and it's not very hot to see a loop with nothing; the text often adds some "context" that makes it hotter.
Now the things that I would've liked to see in this game:
Friendship's path: I know, it's an adult game, why would anyone want that? The "problem" was that I didn't want a relationship with every girl, just the one ;) and like I said, I don't care about Liza in a romantic way but she could've been a very close and dear sister. My "canon" will always be Bella but if the MC doesn't start a relationship with any of the other girls, most days feel really empty "wait until evening"/"go to sleep", I mean, does he not leave the room? Does he not talk to anyone, not even by message? Therefore, I think it would've been interesting to add a friendship's path or family's path whatever you want to call it, in order to bond with the rest of your family and get to know them a little more even if you're not fucking them. In the game, if you don't have a relationship with a girl, she almost disappear and you never see her again (almost). For example, I would've liked to keep talking to Liza and even have the option of telling her about my relationship with Bella and persuading her that she won't become a religious fanatic, and that could've been a way of exploiting a bit more the whole trust/corruption system, I imagine something like, with enough corruption she might accept my relationship with Bella; and with enough trust she might be willing to see Justin and company as violent fanatics (something similar as in her romance, but with a LOT of talking/persuading and trust/corruption checks). I also would've liked to talk more with Susan outside the Discreet/Love path that it didn't seem fully developed either. I'm sure that with your level of writing you could've came up with very funny/interesting situations in this path.
Electronic ¿daily planner?: It would've been better (in my opinion of course) if you had implemented a kind of electronic agenda to plan all the activities of the day, because it seems that most can be done in any order (except in some cases) and that breaks a little the continuity... For example, before going to the gym with Bella, the MC can do other activities, what happens in that case? Does Bella wait for you to finish before you go? The appointment at Discreet that you have scheduled at 2 pm, can be made immediately after breakfast or leave it last and doesn't really matter. In another game (Holiday Island) I saw something similar implemented and when two activities crash with each other, one of them can be re-scheduled at another time. This way you could actually missed some activities, if you're not carefull enough, affecting your relationships.
Abrupt romances: I love Bella, I repeated that a lot in this message, but her romance begins very abruptly (my issue is with the begining, then it was pure bliss for me). She hates you, you give her a 5000 loan and she loves you instantly, and that loan doesn't even solve her problem, it's just a delay; and I didn't like that if you don't want to persue that romance you have to be an asshole or break her heart really bad (being a bigger asshole). On the other hand, I would've liked to be able to help her (because I really HATE Dwayne, I wanted to fucking murder him, and I don't want to know what happens if you don't help her, she might end up as his bitch or something equally heartbreaking...) without starting a romance in a playthrough with only Rachel, but we don't have that option without being a douchbag. I also would've liked that it developed a little more before going into romance so it's not like "I hate you - 5000 later - I love you", although I understand that that should be way to get her to like you because deep down Bella is a romantic and the idea of White Knight rescuing her it's probably something she really likes (although she wouldn't admit it). For example, with Liza you get to help her get rid of Brody and then the MC can choose to start a relationship or not without breaking her heart (kiss in her cheek/ kiss in the mouth), of course, it would've been repetitive if it were exactly like that for all the others girls but it's good to have that kind of option without being an asshole every time you don't want a romance. Finally, I saw other comments talking about "too much sex", for me that wasn't a bad thing, I saw in other games people complaining because the game was very slow or didn't have enough sex, now there is too much xD, it must be very difficult for you creators to find the perfect balance and try to please everyone (or most people). What I want to point out, however, is that the complete harem sex didn't do anything for me, not because the scenes were bad or anything, I just didn't connect with any girl (not even with my beloved Bella), they were so many women that none mattered. That's why I want to congratulate you again on your writing, the connection I felt with Bella makes sex with her alone much more intimate and hot than those scenes with the whole harem. Of course, there are a lot of other scenes that were really hot too, almost all of the scenes with Rachel, the ones with Adriana and Susan, etc. I didn't like it very much the whole “piss on me” thing, but hey, everyone have their own kinks. I know it's almost a meme now, but “sorry for my english” xD clearly, I'm not as fluent as I'd like but I hope you read this and understand what I tried to say! Awesome game dude! Can't wait for the next!
Thanks a lot spiegelbild! I must confess I fell a little in love with Bella during the development too. I didn't change her character model, but I did get better at rendering the images as the game progressed.
The friendship/platonic routes would have been a great touch, but I had to prioritize. Adding them would greatly enhance the immersion of the game, I agree completely. For the next project I'm trying to strike a better balance between the romantic and platonic, so that the game doesn't feel as empty if you don't pursue a particular path.
I started Sisterly Lust on my own and have been developing it for the past two years in my spare-time and I must say that there are quite a few lessons I've learned about developing visual novels. So my next project will hopefully build on the strong points of Sisterly Lust and I hope you'll get to enjoy it too. ;)
ohhoho bella wont take anal????? lol wont spoil but did you try her other route it isnt as bad and get very consenting very late on and get revenge route on the guy blackmail. also i went on every girl possible and found 8 by choices .. yeah i actually got a bit disgusted with how much i got to see but that just mean it was well done lol
by too much i would say you can go for like 15 characters in totals .lol so yea i got actually burned out going any chick i saw
First I'll get the positives out of the way: I love this. The artstyle is great, and I actually enjoy the stills, instead of regular animations. Ive read you had some trouble in that department, but I believe you're able to get much more details on the stills whereas normally the animation might look too "different".
I also really love the characters. James is awesome, and the banter between you and the middle sister can be very charming.
But, here come the problems I have. I know the game isnt finished, so maybe these will be finished at some point:
1) Story progression doesnt always make sense, with the wrong dialogue/story playing in the end. In first playthrough I failed to go on any path (I slept with everyone except the sisters/mom), and I just ended up skipping days, until suddenly your character declares he's moving away, saying goodbye to everyone.
On a third playthrough, I ended up with the youngest and middle sister... and after the middle one tried a wedding dress, we skipped about a 100 days and suddenly she's pregnant, and the elder sister is suddenly BACK with her asshole boyfriend (despite having broken up with him over his office adventures) before.
2) I dont have sound. Im not sure if this is by design, but its kind of disappointing to have to run background music. Fortunately the Katawa Shouju OST is good enough, but its still a missing element.
3) cant believe Im saying this but... the amount of sex is sometimes really distracting. Early on its kind of exciting when establishing some form of connection, but now I realised that anything female in this game that isnt Mrs Steele is willing (very willing) to just fuck you. The two friends of the youngest sister, I understand. They're sluts, they have kinks. But suddenly, boom, the cousin wants a piece too. Then the random bar girl. Then the bar girls mother (and even the brother if her stories are to be believed). Then the nerd's mom, the yoga instructor, etc etc. I understand its an erotic visual novel but this kind of feels like overkill. Plus, Ive realised that almost anytime you turn someone down it kind of makes it seem like your character is an asshole for doing so.
4) it ook me 3 playthroughs to somewhat figure out what the corruption stands for, and even now it's not very clear entirely. It seems like an interesting system that could have been explored a bit more.
5) For the life of me I cant seem to figure out how to go the elder sister route. I got rid of that asshole, but after that, and the game on the beach I never interacted with her again. Not ever. I got a scene where she and the middle sister got into wrestling, but nothing else.
6) sometimes it seems the routes just... eliminate certain scenes. I didnt get the james confession during my first playthrough, so the sudden comment of a threeway with Ana kind of blindsided me. On the THIRD playthrough I DID get that scene though. I have no idea why that scene wouldnt be there. It seems like a rather important part of the story.
Anyway, Ive greatly enjoyed this so far and I hope for more content and a finished product at some point. The art is amazing, and the dialogue can be very amusing. There are some typos every now and then, but nothing that ruins the experience for me. So thanks!
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Lmao, okay so... Riley just moved in, the game ACKNOWLEDGES that I met her through the job at the supermarket... yet the elder sister is still planning her wedding. I think I broke it into the 4th dimension
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(oldest sister): "You're not all seriously considering this are you? I have a life here. A fiancee"
Thanks for the extensive review! Really glad you enjoyed the dialog, writing is the element I enjoyed the most about developing the game.
All the points you make are certainly valid. Sounds like you hit on quite a few bugs too. I'm still fixing things on the many paths and rely a lot on player input. If you happen to have saves at various points of your playthrough, I'd be very interested in loading them to debug the game. You can reach me at perverteergames@gmail.com if you'd like, or upload the saves to some hosting service and link them here if you want.
As for music, it's a little late to add it now, because of the sheer size of the game. My next project will have music, by the way.
I do have some save files, though they were made at random parts in my 3-4 playthroughs so I dont really know what happened where. Honestly what baffles me mostly is Riley and Elder sister. And also that the sister you're not in a relationship with kind of spills the beans on the home situation, which is odd from a story standpoint (the youngest sister hates mrs steele, and while the elder sister is very naive I doubt she would talk bad about her brother or sisters/mom like that, even with a priest).
If you dont mind my asking, the trust and corruption system: how does it work exactly? Based on what happened with the youngest sister, the corruption decides how likely it is they will be kinky with you, while trust decides if you can stick around or not? It seems to work very well with youngest/middle sister, but while the trust on elder sister is high as hell (21 or something after the breakup), it seems her corruption never rises. And the mom's stats never seem to go above 13 or so.
Also, this reminds me of another thing: Relationship (yes), relationship (dominant), and relationship (love). I reached "dominant" with middle sister (paying her small amounts of money, then opt to not do so because she talked bad, then saying you'll give her the money afterall), which then led to "relationship yes", and after the nerd thing it turned into "love". The youngest sister however NEVER had her status changed beyond "yes" no matter what I did. Is this an oversight, an unfinished idea, or another bug?
Anyway, I'll fiddle around with the game some more later. If my own guess is correct, I think sleeping with other women seems to (heavily) botch up certain story progressions, notably Ana and Alina early on.
"sister you're not in a relationship with" ?? I was in a relationship with all of them, so I'm not sure what you mean. There was no "bean spilling" in my playthrough.
I think Perverteer has said that the points system was something that he started with, but sort of abandoned later. For me, the points didn't seemed to matter much, and had little (if any) bearing on behavior - Liza was very high in both, but she was reluctant until late game anyway, and Susan was 6/2 but still fine with everything.
"I think sleeping with other women seems to (heavily) botch up certain story progressions, notably Ana and Alina early on." I didn't find that to be the case at all. I slept with every character (including all secondary characters) with no really detrimental effects.
Im just posting what happened in my own playthrough.
I got the elder sister to the point where she finds out the boyfriend cheating and she breaks up with him. However, after the bikinishopping I never got any further interactions with her, and the relationship status never changed from "no". While continueing the game and establishing a relationship with the other two sisters, it ended up with the elder sister doing the "confessions" while talking about her upcoming wedding (which she shouldnt have) with Brody (who was long gone by this point). During her confession she flatout tells the guy that both sisters are pregnant and theres only the brother in the picture. Then she goes "no, that couldnt be" and they have a talk about the situation. Storywise, it shouldnt make sense.
The point system, its possible that didnt do anything. Considering how its a fairly "do or dont" game (which is the case with most erotic graphic novels) I was a bit confused by it. First I thought it meant corruption = game over, but then I realised the more kinky stuff you did the higher it got, so I felt that COULD have been related. However, it never really did much with any of the decisions, so I suppose you are right on it having no effect.
As for Alina and Ana, again it's just my findings. During my first two playthroughs where I did sleep with ana and alina I never got the james confession (yet near the end he did mention they're having sex together, even if both girls are in a "relationship" with you). During the third playthrough I did NOT enter a relationship with either, and I got the James confession.
I imagine this game's story looking like a branch, and for some reason scenes that should happen, dont happen, and scenes that shouldnt happen (or even be possible) do happen. Its like, if certain events did NOT happen (like getting together with the elder sister) the game assumes you never did anything with her and she's still in her relationship. Its hard to put into words, English isn't my main language, I hope that makes some sense.
Anyway, I am kind of sad this game will only have one more update as Im a sucker for games that establish relationships (even if its porn). I think this game reached a solid 2nd place for me, right below Katawa Shouju (which is a great emotional rollercoaster) and just above the Sagara Family (which I just love for the sometimes silly writing).
Yeah... I did notice some rough spots as I mentioned in my first comment below. In my first go, Mrs. Steel was mentioned late game, and I had no idea who she was.
I guess I just got lucky with my second playthrough and had absolutely no continuity issues at all, and had success with all characters and side characters. Thx for reminding me about Katawa Shouju I don't think I ever finished it.
The trust and corruption determine whether you can progress with certain characters and how far during the early stages of the game. Along the way, the points became too abstract and I've relied on player choices from that moment on. Sisterly Lust is my first game, so there are some beginners mistakes in there for sure.
As for the relationship status for all of the girls, they can be either yes or no, except for Bella and Susan, because they have two paths. Bella has a romance and a submissive path, Susan has something similar.
Some of the errors mentioned should be fixed in the upcoming build, by the way. Also, I while I won't be releasing any new content for Sisterly Lust, I'm going to support it, so bugfix release are still to be expected after v1.0 is released in January.
Very happy to rank so high under Katawa Shoujo, by the way. ;)
even you say beginners mistake this game is Soo nice im spend hours on this I cant make ana and alina came with us and Make all the other girls come to the island kinda a bummer that stuck me almost 2 days to make it work and it still did't work and also CANT W8 FOR 26 DECEMBER... ITS FELLS LIKE A CHRISTMAS GIFT
My first playthrough was enjoyable... until... I got back from vacation and James called to share a confession. The only two options were TERRIBLE (and hypocritical!), and didn't make any sense at all for the MC ("She's MINE!" and "You need professional help" WTF?). This made me want to just quit the game at that point, and that was upsetting. =( Right after that, from day 22-32, most days I could only wake up, wait til evening and go to sleep with no other interactions available at all. Overall, interesting characters and decent dialog and story - but it does have some rough spots.
That's weird. Were you in a relationship with any of the main girls (Liza, Bella, Rachel or Susan) at that point? There should be an extra conversation option at that point if you are in a relationship with any of them. But I get the feeling that you passed on the main cast (either by accident or on purpose) opting only for the side characters and then the game is probably quite empty most days.
@Perverteer - Yes, that's exactly what happened. I think the problem was at the beginning, the punishment for lewd behavior is too severe (game over), so it forces you to be too cautious. I didn't even see or click on the relationship icon until late in the game, and by that point there is no way to do anything about it or even access any of the main story arcs. Maybe it just needs a "Bad ending" screen - "You decide to move out and start a new life on your own" sort of thing if you fail to have any relationships by a certain point.
That being said, I started over, and this time I did things MUCH differently and wow... what a difference when you unlock all the characters storylines. Great job particularly on the Bella arc... I'm a sucker for a good tsundere character. ngl, Got me right in the feels a couple times.
ps: I just got to the James conversation... much better.
Thanks! Glad you got to enjoy the game in the end.
I must confess I don't really like the game overs at the beginning myself, I've toned it down in place so that they don't happen easily, but you can still hit upon them.
Okay... finished my second playthrough, and ended up with optimal endings for everyone. Protip: Quicksaves, rollbacks, and saves are your friends. ;P
I'm pretty sure I may have missed only a couple of (very minor) scenes, but I'll definitely be playing through again.
I dabble in Ren'Py a bit - I wish the scripts weren't compiled so I could just add my own image and scene galleries (for my own "purposes", heh) - since it doesn't sound like galleries are going to make it into the final release. =(
Am I the only one who didnt do any romance with the family? I didnt even find any possibility for it. But I did have a good sex with Ana, Alina, and on the island with the hot mother and later with her daughter. Is there any option to have sex with the sisters?
I have begun working on a scene gallery a good while back, but there are so many sex scenes in the game that it turned out to be a gigantic effort. I'm still in doubt whether I'm going to implement it. Achievements/unlockables might appear in a future version though. The next game will have a gallery from the start.
Having hot animations and sex scenes are one thing, and argueably the most important thing an erotic visual novel can provide. However, while I find the animations to be lacklustor, I find myself driven to play further into a game by something any novel should have, erotic or not; great dialogue. I find the situations and comments of these characters funny and genuinely interesting, as well as exaturated, yet at the same time believable. The kinks present are well executed, and I enjoy the more subtle changes in facial expression depending on dialogue. Overall, I very much enjoyed because its good writing and well paced and executed kinks and scenarios make up for the issues presented by lack of visually pleasing animations. I hope this criticism is beneficial to the developers, and I thank them for allowing people to play this for free.
Thanks for your well-thought out review! Just one developer though, I'm working on these projects mostly on my own, with the help of a couple of volunteer testers and proofreaders.
The lack of animations is a bit of a sore spot for me. I'm terrible at animation and lacked the hardware to render them for a long time during Sisterly Lust's development. For the next project I'm looking at maybe including animation, but I'll have to outsource it, so I can't promise anything definitive yet.
No worries my guy. A lot of games like this have better animations, but lack in spacing between encounters, making the game feel unrewarding for throwing everything at you, or making you work to hard to the point of losing interest. You have this down to pat, as well written and believable dialogue. If animations are not your strong suit, then so be it! The rest of this was very well executed for a one man team, and I respect you for setting aside the time to interact with commenters like myself. The one thing that I would say could use improvement other than animations is establishing some sort of core gameplay loop. While the concepts are exiting and well written, sometimes it feel handed to you by sticking around, rather than earned through the choices you made. It could be as simple as key items to progress through different routes, or a minigame like maybe at the supermarket to help you get into rileys pants. Other than this, I cant really complain. You do great work, and I personally would love to hear what you have in store for us next. I could also proofread things if you need the help going forward. Thank you for your responses and interaction with myself and other commentors, and I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors.
Ohh I didn't saw anyone commenting but, there was a bug in some part of the story. In some part of Rachel's path she asks you to tell an erotic story. First time I accepted, in the second I didn't. So during the second playthrough in some day she just asked the story to be told, and then the flashback starts.
By the way I also had sleepless nights, so much fun!
Ohh. I've downloaded the game again these days and the bug is still there. It happens in the morning of day 35. When Bella leaves the room, Rachel asks Max to continue the story.
Hey the game is pretty cool, even funny at times but I have a queestion. I saved my game at lets say ex moment in the story; I ended up completing it fully to where Liza and my character are getting prepared to get married. Do I have to start all the way back where I saved prior or can I resume from where the game capped off?
You can continue your save in the new version, provided you haven't saved on the actual "To be continued" screen, but just before. Otherwise you'll need to reload that save and rollback to the last scene you have played and save again. But saves should always carry over and be playable.
Absolutely love your work! Not my usual kink, but I love how captivating your story is. I'm beyond thrilled to hear that you will be starting a new project. I'm looking forward to supporting your next endeavor!
I'm honestly baffled with this game. I had already played a similar storybased game (Date Ariane) but SL is something new. The characters are beautiful, the dialogues are fun, the scenes are exciting, it's a really long game!
I played it for days until their second airplane trip. Thank you so much for posting this! =) I'm really looking forward to see its 1.0 version.
I may be doing something wrong but every time I try and play, the game only lets me play for a minute before the game crashes and I have to restart the program. I love the game and would really like to play the whole thing, but it's a little hard to play.
hey just jumping back on to see what the status is on the next update. Is there a release date. Also is the new game you're working on going to be anthing like this one?
Next public release will be December 26th. My next project will be a science-fiction VN. So the theme is different, but the mechanics are much the same (though there won't be corruption and trust points). The fetishes in the games will also be largely the same, with some new (optional) ones added to the mix. You can read more about it here: https://perverteer.com/tales-from-the-unending-void/
quite enjoying the game so far. found the stories 'Bella' and 'Liza' to be the easiest to aquire. 'Rachel''s story/relationship seems the least obvious to advance for me at the moment (main save is on Day 35)
And with the younger sister i am never able to get her to the island with the rest of the family am i doing somethong wrong or it supposed to be like that?
There is, but it's currently only available for patrons over at Patreon. When v1.0 is released here I intend to add the walkthrough and the extra scenes edition here too as part of one of the price tiers.
It's absolutely possible to get the youngest sister to go with you, but you should have a relationship with her, otherwise you won't be able to ask her.
tbh mid and older sisters are pretty dang easy to get the relationships for, the mother story i haven't touched yet though. want to get younger's before that
All relationships with the girls have to be initiated early in the game, because at a certain point it isn't possible to hook up with them. With Rachel it's a matter of getting her trust and corruption high enough and going with her on a date to the cinema.
tried turning down Ana and Alina, but no luck. i know how to get started with Rachel (kiss her, then spy on her in the bathroom.) but beyond that i'm stumped. lol
Hey dev I found a bug I believe. When the counselor arrives to tell the mother about the incident at school, even when the mother already knows about the relationship and is a part of it, the game treats it as if she doesn't and the argument ensues where she is angry with the player. However, after the exchange ends, it automatically continues to where she says there needs to be a family meeting to decide on what to do about the problem. I also happened upon an error where riley moves in and everyone but liza is pregnant. Images missing I believe is what the error said.
Thanks for the reports perp! The first one should already be fixed in v0.23. The missing images is new for me. Would it be possible to copy the contents of the error? I'm curious to know what images is missing exactly.
I am sorry, I really didn't know what I was doing because I am new to messing around with those things. I just remember reading that it was a missing image error message...
Thank you very much for making this. The scene between Bella and Rachel a few updates back was among the hottest in any game of this type I ever played (or even any sex related media). Only (small) complaint is lack of pregnancy on the Bella sub route :P Best of luck in your next endeavor!
this ends in day 143...will the ending released later
[edit] silly me i finished the game with 0 relationship and thought only can get them in next release until i scroll by the commens and realise how much of a noob i am..eitherway this is the best nsfw game ive played got me hooked for hours
I gotta day this is the best visual novel I have found off this site, I am already on my 3 playthrough. I am having trouble with getting bella to let me date Rachel after I confess to her when we are caught but I mentioned that below. I love the art work and righting, I think the way it is written makes the difference from the other ones posted on this site. One thing I wish you could change is the relationship of the family, i.e make them all step instead of blood as I am not into invest but it is something I can overlook, lol. Something I did find odd though, is why are Bella and Susan are the only ones that say (Love) on the relationship menu. I have gotten Rachel all the way to like 20/20 and Liza to like 30 something by 20 and yet bella falls in love in single digits and so does susan. Despite the fact that it seems like Liza falls pretty hard for you as does Rachel, I'm assuming that's just an oversight. Also, maybe it will be in the update, but I think you should be able to have an orgy with all that go to the island with you, I wound up proposing to; My Susan, Rachel, Bella, Liza, Iris, Adrianna & Riley, but never got more than a fivesome.
IMO, Nina is the most gorgeous character. Even more than Bella, who I think Is the most beautiful in the Smith family. Nina has a Brazilian type look. I imagine her as Adriana Lima.
Thanks a lot for your review! You can actually revert the game to its censored state, the family becomes friends in that case. The procedure is detailed here on my personal website. The command becomes set_special(False) in this case.
Roughly halfway through the game's development I decided to rely solely on choices instead of points, so that might explain the weird stats per girl. In my next game I don't plan to utilize a points system at all.
The group sex scenes are quite fun to write, but a very hard to render, because of all the possible configurations. You have variable amount of girls of which four can be pregnant. So I'm afraid it's fivesomes only for this game. ;)
Is that the only change in the censored version, or does it actually censore the whole game? Also, do you have any walkthroughs that go past day 30? I'm trying to figure out how I got Rachel and Bella to go along with me dating both.
Some scenes are unavailable in the censored version, notably the threesome with Nia and Rebeca and some stuff with James and Ana. There's a currently walkthrough available for subscribers on Patreon that's up-to-date with the game. I'm planning on including the walkthrough for the game here as well at a certain price tier when the game is finished.
I played the censored version first time through, and the problem for me was that if Max is just a friend of the family, the story doesn't make much sense. I kept wondering why Mrs. Steel should be so outraged that Rachel was pregnant. Boys knock up their girlfriends all the time. Unfortunate, yes, but not what you'd call deviant. And even if all the women in the household get pregnant, it's hard to believe the cops would take much of an interest.
Then I downloaded the uncensored version, and I thought, OK, now I get it.
For anyone that is interested, I was able to get back to having the two youngest siblings enter into a relationship. I'm not sure all of the choices I needed were but what it seems to have been was, I needed to call and meet Alina for help to "break the ice" with rachel. I bought her flowers, tickets and a sexy outfit. Then I met and proposed the polyamory with her first, then I got the option to suggest it to Bella.
Bella and Susan only say (Love) because there are other options with them. Rachel and Liza can only be Love so it doesn't bother putting anything there.
Wow! Finished the game. But I only got to love one of the sisters. (the hot one, middle sister). Is it possible to love all the 4 ladies? And It ended after a proposal. The wedding didn't take place? Is there more in store? And when shall it be released?
Yeah you can get all four but if your really good there are more to be had. The next installment is due in December if I read correctly in a post but it will be the last for now as the author would like to broaden their scope a bit.
I have accomplished the harem before, resulting in a five some with all the sisters and mother but this playthrough I was attempting the same thing without any pregnancies, I wanted to see how mrs steel reacted if she wasnt curious about any other the girl's mysterious pregnancies. However, this time I made a mistake and cant figure out why, bella forces me to break up with her or Rachel after Rachel catches us and I know there is a third option but dont remember how I got it last time.
I am confused why that walkthrough didnt go past day 30, it got right to what I needed and stopped.
Just finished (I'm not crying, YOU are). Great writing, didn't read the walkthrough until after the Island. Got everyone there. One question. The romance/corruption tracker seems to be broken. I mean I assume they're all "In Love" with me, we're engaged after all, but only Katie (my name for my favorite, the brunette middle sister) shows "love" and Mom shows 0 trust and 1 corruption. No real biggie, just curious if this is a common bug. Also, nice touch adding Riley and Adriana (too bad about Ana, Ailina, (hell, even James)) Also, is there a gallery anywhere I missed? A lot of these Novels (Harem Hotel comes to mind, great game as well for those who haven't tried it) have galleries of collected scenes. Anyway, thanks for the roller coaster! (last minute escape FTW!) I look forward to the last update!!!
Glad you enjoyed it! Not sure about the trust/corruption tracker, I'll have a look at it.
I started developing a collection gallery with all the sex scenes, but there are so much in the game it proved a little too much work. Maybe I'll work on it in the future.
Hope you enjoy the last update once it is released!
I know what OP meant, after Rachel finds me in Bella's bed, the other event doesn't increase or decrease their status. Guess you didn't write the numbers for the events after day 30(something like that day?) BTW, love the story, passive Bella is something new. Can't wait for the last update!!!!
Huh. The game randomly skipped to day 139 and ended with me apparently moving out. i didnt get any events after ~Day 20 til 30ish when the time skip happened. i assume i lost but idk why, trust was positive on all family members :thonk:
This game is messed up my sleep schedule, it's so addicting. Btw I got few endings and the best one is when I got Susan, Rachel, and Bella at the same time but I lost Liza though, is it possible to get all 4 of them at the same time?
Just finished the game for the first time and tbh I stayed up all night. WOW these are some well written stories. However, is it possible to have Liza love you? I tried many combinations and quite running out of options to choose. Again, thank you for this game the plot is amazing and I enjoy every second of it. ( Well, except for Broody’s hobby and mrs.Steel of course)
The new updates never fail to impress me hahaha its like i got new reading hobbies brilliants work ever good luck on next project look forward to it 😁😊
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When will the next update be out I'm dying to find out what happens next
The next release will drop on the 26th of December.
The game is great so far but as i was on day 39 heading to 40, it skipped me straight to day 139. I have no idea how
The time jump is intentional. ;)
Alright man I got you
went for any girl i found and yeah actually made so burned out like atleast 15 characters in totals with most going atleast twice ... lol personally loved some of the setting and choices you got. especially revenge on dwayne ... with the m.. yeah also like many say i really liked bella the most and all other character in their own way for some reason really liked arianna maybe i am just a sadist... lol but yea was fun with irony on taking the wife for a certain character lol
last note: actually understand why you put so many girls. for example you wanted to build the sisters first so they actually was worth it or something and not easy. so you basically made filler characters or chances if you wanna be or precise to actually get sex (adult novel duh) as a completist i kind go for harem and playboy...well
Adriana is such a sweet girl. ;) Glad you enjoyed it!
haha true!
When is the next content update I have really enjoyed it so far and I really want more. Keep up the great work 👍
The next public release will be on the 26th.
Okay thank you for your quick reply and keep up the great work 👍
First of all I want to congratulate you for the artstyle and writting; I've played quite a lot of adult games and this one is one of the few I actually care about the dialogues instead of pressing skip. I've found myself laughing in real life with the comments or thoughts of the MC. The girls are also very well written, in other games, it seems that all of them have the same personality (or don't have any at all) but in this one each girl has a very characteristic and very cool personality. In particular, I fell in love with Bella, the relationship she has with the MC is as if they were a couple in real life, the bond they develop is wonderful, for example, when they exchange playful insults in bed, or when the MC ruins the surprise and Bella begins to "narrate" what she would've done, and in the end the MC ends up saying "luckyly you are a very evocative storyteller" haha! they're perfect for each other, they're both such smartasses. I got so involved with Bella that in the scene after the forest when she stares at you on the couch and starts to cry, I almost hug the monitor. And when I saw her try on the wedding dresses I almost started to cry, I don't know if you “touched” her character model but at first she seemed to me very "meh" and then (probably because my perception changed) she became the most beautiful girl of the whole game, that beautiful face and dat ass ... daaaammn. I love that deep down she's a romantic and very shy (you have to "work" hard to get her to open) but in the end everything is worth it. My canon is a playthrough with only her (and pregnant of course). I really love her.
Another one that I like (although not as much as Bella) is Rachel, she's very cute, playfull and kinky (so far she's the only one willing to try anal! Go go Rachel!), her romance is very fun. On the other hand, I don't care in the slightest about Liza; and Susan is interesting especially in the Discreet part.
I liked that you have opted for stills rather than animations, if at some point you get to include them, it'd be good if they have text, I've seen other games with empty animations and it's not very hot to see a loop with nothing; the text often adds some "context" that makes it hotter.
Now the things that I would've liked to see in this game:
Friendship's path: I know, it's an adult game, why would anyone want that? The "problem" was that I didn't want a relationship with every girl, just the one ;) and like I said, I don't care about Liza in a romantic way but she could've been a very close and dear sister. My "canon" will always be Bella but if the MC doesn't start a relationship with any of the other girls, most days feel really empty "wait until evening"/"go to sleep", I mean, does he not leave the room? Does he not talk to anyone, not even by message? Therefore, I think it would've been interesting to add a friendship's path or family's path whatever you want to call it, in order to bond with the rest of your family and get to know them a little more even if you're not fucking them. In the game, if you don't have a relationship with a girl, she almost disappear and you never see her again (almost). For example, I would've liked to keep talking to Liza and even have the option of telling her about my relationship with Bella and persuading her that she won't become a religious fanatic, and that could've been a way of exploiting a bit more the whole trust/corruption system, I imagine something like, with enough corruption she might accept my relationship with Bella; and with enough trust she might be willing to see Justin and company as violent fanatics (something similar as in her romance, but with a LOT of talking/persuading and trust/corruption checks). I also would've liked to talk more with Susan outside the Discreet/Love path that it didn't seem fully developed either. I'm sure that with your level of writing you could've came up with very funny/interesting situations in this path.
Electronic ¿daily planner?: It would've been better (in my opinion of course) if you had implemented a kind of electronic agenda to plan all the activities of the day, because it seems that most can be done in any order (except in some cases) and that breaks a little the continuity... For example, before going to the gym with Bella, the MC can do other activities, what happens in that case? Does Bella wait for you to finish before you go? The appointment at Discreet that you have scheduled at 2 pm, can be made immediately after breakfast or leave it last and doesn't really matter. In another game (Holiday Island) I saw something similar implemented and when two activities crash with each other, one of them can be re-scheduled at another time. This way you could actually missed some activities, if you're not carefull enough, affecting your relationships.
Abrupt romances: I love Bella, I repeated that a lot in this message, but her romance begins very abruptly (my issue is with the begining, then it was pure bliss for me). She hates you, you give her a 5000 loan and she loves you instantly, and that loan doesn't even solve her problem, it's just a delay; and I didn't like that if you don't want to persue that romance you have to be an asshole or break her heart really bad (being a bigger asshole). On the other hand, I would've liked to be able to help her (because I really HATE Dwayne, I wanted to fucking murder him, and I don't want to know what happens if you don't help her, she might end up as his bitch or something equally heartbreaking...) without starting a romance in a playthrough with only Rachel, but we don't have that option without being a douchbag. I also would've liked that it developed a little more before going into romance so it's not like "I hate you - 5000 later - I love you", although I understand that that should be way to get her to like you because deep down Bella is a romantic and the idea of White Knight rescuing her it's probably something she really likes (although she wouldn't admit it). For example, with Liza you get to help her get rid of Brody and then the MC can choose to start a relationship or not without breaking her heart (kiss in her cheek/ kiss in the mouth), of course, it would've been repetitive if it were exactly like that for all the others girls but it's good to have that kind of option without being an asshole every time you don't want a romance.
Finally, I saw other comments talking about "too much sex", for me that wasn't a bad thing, I saw in other games people complaining because the game was very slow or didn't have enough sex, now there is too much xD, it must be very difficult for you creators to find the perfect balance and try to please everyone (or most people). What I want to point out, however, is that the complete harem sex didn't do anything for me, not because the scenes were bad or anything, I just didn't connect with any girl (not even with my beloved Bella), they were so many women that none mattered. That's why I want to congratulate you again on your writing, the connection I felt with Bella makes sex with her alone much more intimate and hot than those scenes with the whole harem. Of course, there are a lot of other scenes that were really hot too, almost all of the scenes with Rachel, the ones with Adriana and Susan, etc. I didn't like it very much the whole “piss on me” thing, but hey, everyone have their own kinks.
I know it's almost a meme now, but “sorry for my english” xD clearly, I'm not as fluent as I'd like but I hope you read this and understand what I tried to say! Awesome game dude! Can't wait for the next!
Thanks a lot spiegelbild! I must confess I fell a little in love with Bella during the development too. I didn't change her character model, but I did get better at rendering the images as the game progressed.
The friendship/platonic routes would have been a great touch, but I had to prioritize. Adding them would greatly enhance the immersion of the game, I agree completely. For the next project I'm trying to strike a better balance between the romantic and platonic, so that the game doesn't feel as empty if you don't pursue a particular path.
I started Sisterly Lust on my own and have been developing it for the past two years in my spare-time and I must say that there are quite a few lessons I've learned about developing visual novels. So my next project will hopefully build on the strong points of Sisterly Lust and I hope you'll get to enjoy it too. ;)
ohhoho bella wont take anal????? lol wont spoil but did you try her other route it isnt as bad and get very consenting very late on and get revenge route on the guy blackmail. also i went on every girl possible and found 8 by choices .. yeah i actually got a bit disgusted with how much i got to see but that just mean it was well done lol
by too much i would say you can go for like 15 characters in totals .lol so yea i got actually burned out going any chick i saw
So... there's a few things on this.
First I'll get the positives out of the way: I love this. The artstyle is great, and I actually enjoy the stills, instead of regular animations. Ive read you had some trouble in that department, but I believe you're able to get much more details on the stills whereas normally the animation might look too "different".
I also really love the characters. James is awesome, and the banter between you and the middle sister can be very charming.
But, here come the problems I have. I know the game isnt finished, so maybe these will be finished at some point:
1) Story progression doesnt always make sense, with the wrong dialogue/story playing in the end. In first playthrough I failed to go on any path (I slept with everyone except the sisters/mom), and I just ended up skipping days, until suddenly your character declares he's moving away, saying goodbye to everyone.
On a third playthrough, I ended up with the youngest and middle sister... and after the middle one tried a wedding dress, we skipped about a 100 days and suddenly she's pregnant, and the elder sister is suddenly BACK with her asshole boyfriend (despite having broken up with him over his office adventures) before.
2) I dont have sound. Im not sure if this is by design, but its kind of disappointing to have to run background music. Fortunately the Katawa Shouju OST is good enough, but its still a missing element.
3) cant believe Im saying this but... the amount of sex is sometimes really distracting. Early on its kind of exciting when establishing some form of connection, but now I realised that anything female in this game that isnt Mrs Steele is willing (very willing) to just fuck you. The two friends of the youngest sister, I understand. They're sluts, they have kinks. But suddenly, boom, the cousin wants a piece too. Then the random bar girl. Then the bar girls mother (and even the brother if her stories are to be believed). Then the nerd's mom, the yoga instructor, etc etc. I understand its an erotic visual novel but this kind of feels like overkill. Plus, Ive realised that almost anytime you turn someone down it kind of makes it seem like your character is an asshole for doing so.
4) it ook me 3 playthroughs to somewhat figure out what the corruption stands for, and even now it's not very clear entirely. It seems like an interesting system that could have been explored a bit more.
5) For the life of me I cant seem to figure out how to go the elder sister route. I got rid of that asshole, but after that, and the game on the beach I never interacted with her again. Not ever. I got a scene where she and the middle sister got into wrestling, but nothing else.
6) sometimes it seems the routes just... eliminate certain scenes. I didnt get the james confession during my first playthrough, so the sudden comment of a threeway with Ana kind of blindsided me. On the THIRD playthrough I DID get that scene though. I have no idea why that scene wouldnt be there. It seems like a rather important part of the story.
Anyway, Ive greatly enjoyed this so far and I hope for more content and a finished product at some point. The art is amazing, and the dialogue can be very amusing. There are some typos every now and then, but nothing that ruins the experience for me. So thanks!
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Lmao, okay so... Riley just moved in, the game ACKNOWLEDGES that I met her through the job at the supermarket... yet the elder sister is still planning her wedding. I think I broke it into the 4th dimension
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(oldest sister): "You're not all seriously considering this are you? I have a life here. A fiancee"
Yup. 4th dimension.
Thanks for the extensive review! Really glad you enjoyed the dialog, writing is the element I enjoyed the most about developing the game.
All the points you make are certainly valid. Sounds like you hit on quite a few bugs too. I'm still fixing things on the many paths and rely a lot on player input. If you happen to have saves at various points of your playthrough, I'd be very interested in loading them to debug the game. You can reach me at perverteergames@gmail.com if you'd like, or upload the saves to some hosting service and link them here if you want.
As for music, it's a little late to add it now, because of the sheer size of the game. My next project will have music, by the way.
I do have some save files, though they were made at random parts in my 3-4 playthroughs so I dont really know what happened where. Honestly what baffles me mostly is Riley and Elder sister. And also that the sister you're not in a relationship with kind of spills the beans on the home situation, which is odd from a story standpoint (the youngest sister hates mrs steele, and while the elder sister is very naive I doubt she would talk bad about her brother or sisters/mom like that, even with a priest).
If you dont mind my asking, the trust and corruption system: how does it work exactly? Based on what happened with the youngest sister, the corruption decides how likely it is they will be kinky with you, while trust decides if you can stick around or not? It seems to work very well with youngest/middle sister, but while the trust on elder sister is high as hell (21 or something after the breakup), it seems her corruption never rises. And the mom's stats never seem to go above 13 or so.
Also, this reminds me of another thing: Relationship (yes), relationship (dominant), and relationship (love). I reached "dominant" with middle sister (paying her small amounts of money, then opt to not do so because she talked bad, then saying you'll give her the money afterall), which then led to "relationship yes", and after the nerd thing it turned into "love". The youngest sister however NEVER had her status changed beyond "yes" no matter what I did. Is this an oversight, an unfinished idea, or another bug?
Anyway, I'll fiddle around with the game some more later. If my own guess is correct, I think sleeping with other women seems to (heavily) botch up certain story progressions, notably Ana and Alina early on.
"sister you're not in a relationship with"
?? I was in a relationship with all of them, so I'm not sure what you mean. There was no "bean spilling" in my playthrough.
I think Perverteer has said that the points system was something that he started with, but sort of abandoned later. For me, the points didn't seemed to matter much, and had little (if any) bearing on behavior - Liza was very high in both, but she was reluctant until late game anyway, and Susan was 6/2 but still fine with everything.
"I think sleeping with other women seems to (heavily) botch up certain story progressions, notably Ana and Alina early on."
I didn't find that to be the case at all. I slept with every character (including all secondary characters) with no really detrimental effects.
Im just posting what happened in my own playthrough.
I got the elder sister to the point where she finds out the boyfriend cheating and she breaks up with him. However, after the bikinishopping I never got any further interactions with her, and the relationship status never changed from "no". While continueing the game and establishing a relationship with the other two sisters, it ended up with the elder sister doing the "confessions" while talking about her upcoming wedding (which she shouldnt have) with Brody (who was long gone by this point). During her confession she flatout tells the guy that both sisters are pregnant and theres only the brother in the picture. Then she goes "no, that couldnt be" and they have a talk about the situation. Storywise, it shouldnt make sense.
The point system, its possible that didnt do anything. Considering how its a fairly "do or dont" game (which is the case with most erotic graphic novels) I was a bit confused by it. First I thought it meant corruption = game over, but then I realised the more kinky stuff you did the higher it got, so I felt that COULD have been related. However, it never really did much with any of the decisions, so I suppose you are right on it having no effect.
As for Alina and Ana, again it's just my findings. During my first two playthroughs where I did sleep with ana and alina I never got the james confession (yet near the end he did mention they're having sex together, even if both girls are in a "relationship" with you). During the third playthrough I did NOT enter a relationship with either, and I got the James confession.
I imagine this game's story looking like a branch, and for some reason scenes that should happen, dont happen, and scenes that shouldnt happen (or even be possible) do happen. Its like, if certain events did NOT happen (like getting together with the elder sister) the game assumes you never did anything with her and she's still in her relationship. Its hard to put into words, English isn't my main language, I hope that makes some sense.
Anyway, I am kind of sad this game will only have one more update as Im a sucker for games that establish relationships (even if its porn). I think this game reached a solid 2nd place for me, right below Katawa Shouju (which is a great emotional rollercoaster) and just above the Sagara Family (which I just love for the sometimes silly writing).
Yeah... I did notice some rough spots as I mentioned in my first comment below. In my first go, Mrs. Steel was mentioned late game, and I had no idea who she was.
I guess I just got lucky with my second playthrough and had absolutely no continuity issues at all, and had success with all characters and side characters. Thx for reminding me about Katawa Shouju I don't think I ever finished it.
The trust and corruption determine whether you can progress with certain characters and how far during the early stages of the game. Along the way, the points became too abstract and I've relied on player choices from that moment on. Sisterly Lust is my first game, so there are some beginners mistakes in there for sure.
As for the relationship status for all of the girls, they can be either yes or no, except for Bella and Susan, because they have two paths. Bella has a romance and a submissive path, Susan has something similar.
Some of the errors mentioned should be fixed in the upcoming build, by the way. Also, I while I won't be releasing any new content for Sisterly Lust, I'm going to support it, so bugfix release are still to be expected after v1.0 is released in January.
Very happy to rank so high under Katawa Shoujo, by the way. ;)
even you say beginners mistake this game is Soo nice im spend hours on this I cant make ana and alina came with us and Make all the other girls come to the island kinda a bummer that stuck me almost 2 days to make it work and it still did't work and also CANT W8 FOR 26 DECEMBER... ITS FELLS LIKE A CHRISTMAS GIFT
Pervy Santa will have a present on the second day of Christmas. ;)
My first playthrough was enjoyable... until... I got back from vacation and James called to share a confession. The only two options were TERRIBLE (and hypocritical!), and didn't make any sense at all for the MC ("She's MINE!" and "You need professional help" WTF?). This made me want to just quit the game at that point, and that was upsetting. =(
Right after that, from day 22-32, most days I could only wake up, wait til evening and go to sleep with no other interactions available at all.
Overall, interesting characters and decent dialog and story - but it does have some rough spots.
That's weird. Were you in a relationship with any of the main girls (Liza, Bella, Rachel or Susan) at that point? There should be an extra conversation option at that point if you are in a relationship with any of them. But I get the feeling that you passed on the main cast (either by accident or on purpose) opting only for the side characters and then the game is probably quite empty most days.
@Perverteer - Yes, that's exactly what happened. I think the problem was at the beginning, the punishment for lewd behavior is too severe (game over), so it forces you to be too cautious. I didn't even see or click on the relationship icon until late in the game, and by that point there is no way to do anything about it or even access any of the main story arcs. Maybe it just needs a "Bad ending" screen - "You decide to move out and start a new life on your own" sort of thing if you fail to have any relationships by a certain point.
That being said, I started over, and this time I did things MUCH differently and wow... what a difference when you unlock all the characters storylines. Great job particularly on the Bella arc... I'm a sucker for a good tsundere character. ngl, Got me right in the feels a couple times.
ps: I just got to the James conversation... much better.
Thanks! Glad you got to enjoy the game in the end.
I must confess I don't really like the game overs at the beginning myself, I've toned it down in place so that they don't happen easily, but you can still hit upon them.
Okay... finished my second playthrough, and ended up with optimal endings for everyone. Protip: Quicksaves, rollbacks, and saves are your friends. ;P
I'm pretty sure I may have missed only a couple of (very minor) scenes, but I'll definitely be playing through again.
I dabble in Ren'Py a bit - I wish the scripts weren't compiled so I could just add my own image and scene galleries (for my own "purposes", heh) - since it doesn't sound like galleries are going to make it into the final release. =(
Am I the only one who didnt do any romance with the family? I didnt even find any possibility for it. But I did have a good sex with Ana, Alina, and on the island with the hot mother and later with her daughter. Is there any option to have sex with the sisters?
Hey Perverteer. Thanks so much for the game. Just a quick question:
Are you planning to create the extra option at the main menu? (And put things like best moments, or unlockables during gameplay).
I have begun working on a scene gallery a good while back, but there are so many sex scenes in the game that it turned out to be a gigantic effort. I'm still in doubt whether I'm going to implement it. Achievements/unlockables might appear in a future version though. The next game will have a gallery from the start.
Is there any sound???
Having hot animations and sex scenes are one thing, and argueably the most important thing an erotic visual novel can provide. However, while I find the animations to be lacklustor, I find myself driven to play further into a game by something any novel should have, erotic or not; great dialogue. I find the situations and comments of these characters funny and genuinely interesting, as well as exaturated, yet at the same time believable. The kinks present are well executed, and I enjoy the more subtle changes in facial expression depending on dialogue. Overall, I very much enjoyed because its good writing and well paced and executed kinks and scenarios make up for the issues presented by lack of visually pleasing animations. I hope this criticism is beneficial to the developers, and I thank them for allowing people to play this for free.
Thanks for your well-thought out review! Just one developer though, I'm working on these projects mostly on my own, with the help of a couple of volunteer testers and proofreaders.
The lack of animations is a bit of a sore spot for me. I'm terrible at animation and lacked the hardware to render them for a long time during Sisterly Lust's development. For the next project I'm looking at maybe including animation, but I'll have to outsource it, so I can't promise anything definitive yet.
No worries my guy. A lot of games like this have better animations, but lack in spacing between encounters, making the game feel unrewarding for throwing everything at you, or making you work to hard to the point of losing interest. You have this down to pat, as well written and believable dialogue. If animations are not your strong suit, then so be it! The rest of this was very well executed for a one man team, and I respect you for setting aside the time to interact with commenters like myself. The one thing that I would say could use improvement other than animations is establishing some sort of core gameplay loop. While the concepts are exiting and well written, sometimes it feel handed to you by sticking around, rather than earned through the choices you made. It could be as simple as key items to progress through different routes, or a minigame like maybe at the supermarket to help you get into rileys pants. Other than this, I cant really complain. You do great work, and I personally would love to hear what you have in store for us next. I could also proofread things if you need the help going forward. Thank you for your responses and interaction with myself and other commentors, and I wish you the best of luck in your endeavors.
Ohh I didn't saw anyone commenting but, there was a bug in some part of the story. In some part of Rachel's path she asks you to tell an erotic story. First time I accepted, in the second I didn't. So during the second playthrough in some day she just asked the story to be told, and then the flashback starts.
By the way I also had sleepless nights, so much fun!
Thanks for the report, I'll look into it!
Ohh. I've downloaded the game again these days and the bug is still there. It happens in the morning of day 35. When Bella leaves the room, Rachel asks Max to continue the story.
Hey the game is pretty cool, even funny at times but I have a queestion. I saved my game at lets say ex moment in the story; I ended up completing it fully to where Liza and my character are getting prepared to get married. Do I have to start all the way back where I saved prior or can I resume from where the game capped off?
You can continue your save in the new version, provided you haven't saved on the actual "To be continued" screen, but just before. Otherwise you'll need to reload that save and rollback to the last scene you have played and save again. But saves should always carry over and be playable.
Absolutely love your work! Not my usual kink, but I love how captivating your story is. I'm beyond thrilled to hear that you will be starting a new project. I'm looking forward to supporting your next endeavor!
Thanks, hope to see you for the next one!
I'm honestly baffled with this game. I had already played a similar storybased game (Date Ariane) but SL is something new. The characters are beautiful, the dialogues are fun, the scenes are exciting, it's a really long game!
I played it for days until their second airplane trip. Thank you so much for posting this! =) I'm really looking forward to see its 1.0 version.
The v1.0 is just around the corner and then it's on to the next one. Really glad it was such a pleasant surprise for you.
when is the final version getting released on here?
v0.23 will be released here in December and the final v1.0 in January.
I may be doing something wrong but every time I try and play, the game only lets me play for a minute before the game crashes and I have to restart the program. I love the game and would really like to play the whole thing, but it's a little hard to play.
Does it crash with a specific error message?
No, the application just freezes and says "not responding"
Do you have antivirus installed? And are you able to run similar games without any problems?
I do have antivirus installed, but I run similar games just fine yes.
And your antivirus hasn't quarantined the game or files in the game directory? This might be a long shot, but are your graphics drivers up to date?
The family harem mixed with the crazy ending got me; your work got me off 4 times over the course of the night. Keep up the good work!
Thanks and will do of course!
I played several times, yet I can't figure out how to get Iris. And can a romantic relationship be started with Susan, without the Discreet storyline?
Iris is through Liza story line and Susan can be if you talk to her whenever you get the chance before the trip
hey just jumping back on to see what the status is on the next update. Is there a release date. Also is the new game you're working on going to be anthing like this one?
Next public release will be December 26th. My next project will be a science-fiction VN. So the theme is different, but the mechanics are much the same (though there won't be corruption and trust points). The fetishes in the games will also be largely the same, with some new (optional) ones added to the mix. You can read more about it here: https://perverteer.com/tales-from-the-unending-void/
Awesome read up on it can't wait for the new game and the update!!
quite enjoying the game so far. found the stories 'Bella' and 'Liza' to be the easiest to aquire. 'Rachel''s story/relationship seems the least obvious to advance for me at the moment (main save is on Day 35)
Is there a walktrough avilible?
And with the younger sister i am never able to get her to the island with the rest of the family am i doing somethong wrong or it supposed to be like that?
and thanks for creating a beautifull game
There is, but it's currently only available for patrons over at Patreon. When v1.0 is released here I intend to add the walkthrough and the extra scenes edition here too as part of one of the price tiers.
It's absolutely possible to get the youngest sister to go with you, but you should have a relationship with her, otherwise you won't be able to ask her.
i never get her with me she always stays home because of her friends
tbh mid and older sisters are pretty dang easy to get the relationships for, the mother story i haven't touched yet though. want to get younger's before that
All relationships with the girls have to be initiated early in the game, because at a certain point it isn't possible to hook up with them. With Rachel it's a matter of getting her trust and corruption high enough and going with her on a date to the cinema.
tried turning down Ana and Alina, but no luck. i know how to get started with Rachel (kiss her, then spy on her in the bathroom.) but beyond that i'm stumped. lol
i got all 4 of them to the island and knocked up all 4
Hey, Guys, I played Harem Hotel, Sisterly Lust, Halfway House, Mystic Manor and The Awakening. Is there anymore good games like these?
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Lukes way its still under devolpment but it has a good story and lost of girls
Hey dev I found a bug I believe. When the counselor arrives to tell the mother about the incident at school, even when the mother already knows about the relationship and is a part of it, the game treats it as if she doesn't and the argument ensues where she is angry with the player. However, after the exchange ends, it automatically continues to where she says there needs to be a family meeting to decide on what to do about the problem. I also happened upon an error where riley moves in and everyone but liza is pregnant. Images missing I believe is what the error said.
Thanks for the reports perp! The first one should already be fixed in v0.23. The missing images is new for me. Would it be possible to copy the contents of the error? I'm curious to know what images is missing exactly.
I am sorry, I really didn't know what I was doing because I am new to messing around with those things. I just remember reading that it was a missing image error message...
No problem, I did fix a couple of missing image errors, so hopefully the issue should be fixed in the next release.
... Meh
Played Harem Hotel and absolutely loved it!. Looked up similar games and found this! Very excited to try it out!
Thank you very much for making this. The scene between Bella and Rachel a few updates back was among the hottest in any game of this type I ever played (or even any sex related media).
Only (small) complaint is lack of pregnancy on the Bella sub route :P
Best of luck in your next endeavor!
You're very welcome! ;) I did enjoy creating the Rachel and Bella pairing. Hope you enjoy my next project too.
this ends in day 143...will the ending released later
[edit] silly me i finished the game with 0 relationship and thought only can get them in next release until i scroll by the commens and realise how much of a noob i am..eitherway this is the best nsfw game ive played got me hooked for hours
The last release will be in December with a bugfix release probably to follow in January.
I gotta day this is the best visual novel I have found off this site, I am already on my 3 playthrough. I am having trouble with getting bella to let me date Rachel after I confess to her when we are caught but I mentioned that below. I love the art work and righting, I think the way it is written makes the difference from the other ones posted on this site. One thing I wish you could change is the relationship of the family, i.e make them all step instead of blood as I am not into invest but it is something I can overlook, lol. Something I did find odd though, is why are Bella and Susan are the only ones that say (Love) on the relationship menu. I have gotten Rachel all the way to like 20/20 and Liza to like 30 something by 20 and yet bella falls in love in single digits and so does susan. Despite the fact that it seems like Liza falls pretty hard for you as does Rachel, I'm assuming that's just an oversight. Also, maybe it will be in the update, but I think you should be able to have an orgy with all that go to the island with you, I wound up proposing to; My Susan, Rachel, Bella, Liza, Iris, Adrianna & Riley, but never got more than a fivesome.
I entirely skipped the Iris part. Didbyou get The Yoga instructor with Nina at the end?
Yeah, one of my favorite threesomes in the game. Actually I think it was my favorite.
IMO, Nina is the most gorgeous character. Even more than Bella, who I think Is the most beautiful in the Smith family. Nina has a Brazilian type look. I imagine her as Adriana Lima.
Thanks a lot for your review! You can actually revert the game to its censored state, the family becomes friends in that case. The procedure is detailed here on my personal website. The command becomes set_special(False) in this case.
Roughly halfway through the game's development I decided to rely solely on choices instead of points, so that might explain the weird stats per girl. In my next game I don't plan to utilize a points system at all.
The group sex scenes are quite fun to write, but a very hard to render, because of all the possible configurations. You have variable amount of girls of which four can be pregnant. So I'm afraid it's fivesomes only for this game. ;)
Is that the only change in the censored version, or does it actually censore the whole game? Also, do you have any walkthroughs that go past day 30? I'm trying to figure out how I got Rachel and Bella to go along with me dating both.
Some scenes are unavailable in the censored version, notably the threesome with Nia and Rebeca and some stuff with James and Ana. There's a currently walkthrough available for subscribers on Patreon that's up-to-date with the game. I'm planning on including the walkthrough for the game here as well at a certain price tier when the game is finished.
I played the censored version first time through, and the problem for me was that if Max is just a friend of the family, the story doesn't make much sense. I kept wondering why Mrs. Steel should be so outraged that Rachel was pregnant. Boys knock up their girlfriends all the time. Unfortunate, yes, but not what you'd call deviant. And even if all the women in the household get pregnant, it's hard to believe the cops would take much of an interest.
Then I downloaded the uncensored version, and I thought, OK, now I get it.
For anyone that is interested, I was able to get back to having the two youngest siblings enter into a relationship. I'm not sure all of the choices I needed were but what it seems to have been was, I needed to call and meet Alina for help to "break the ice" with rachel. I bought her flowers, tickets and a sexy outfit. Then I met and proposed the polyamory with her first, then I got the option to suggest it to Bella.
Bella and Susan only say (Love) because there are other options with them. Rachel and Liza can only be Love so it doesn't bother putting anything there.
Well the developer already responded and just said it was an oversight
Is it possible that the secondary characters too get pregnant when the family members are pregnant?
No, only the primary characters have a full pregnancy route.
Wow! Finished the game. But I only got to love one of the sisters. (the hot one, middle sister). Is it possible to love all the 4 ladies? And It ended after a proposal. The wedding didn't take place? Is there more in store? And when shall it be released?
Yeah you can get all four but if your really good there are more to be had. The next installment is due in December if I read correctly in a post but it will be the last for now as the author would like to broaden their scope a bit.
So how to get all four? And which others?
https://workupload.com/file/Yggm42dQ
This should get you through the game though I prefer seeking it out myself.
Thanks, Roy for the walkthrough. In my second play, I got to get a three. Except Rachel. I'll try to get her too.
I have accomplished the harem before, resulting in a five some with all the sisters and mother but this playthrough I was attempting the same thing without any pregnancies, I wanted to see how mrs steel reacted if she wasnt curious about any other the girl's mysterious pregnancies. However, this time I made a mistake and cant figure out why, bella forces me to break up with her or Rachel after Rachel catches us and I know there is a third option but dont remember how I got it last time.
I am confused why that walkthrough didnt go past day 30, it got right to what I needed and stopped.
Just finished (I'm not crying, YOU are). Great writing, didn't read the walkthrough until after the Island. Got everyone there. One question. The romance/corruption tracker seems to be broken. I mean I assume they're all "In Love" with me, we're engaged after all, but only Katie (my name for my favorite, the brunette middle sister) shows "love" and Mom shows 0 trust and 1 corruption. No real biggie, just curious if this is a common bug. Also, nice touch adding Riley and Adriana (too bad about Ana, Ailina, (hell, even James)) Also, is there a gallery anywhere I missed? A lot of these Novels (Harem Hotel comes to mind, great game as well for those who haven't tried it) have galleries of collected scenes. Anyway, thanks for the roller coaster! (last minute escape FTW!) I look forward to the last update!!!
Glad you enjoyed it! Not sure about the trust/corruption tracker, I'll have a look at it.
I started developing a collection gallery with all the sex scenes, but there are so much in the game it proved a little too much work. Maybe I'll work on it in the future.
Hope you enjoy the last update once it is released!
I know what OP meant, after Rachel finds me in Bella's bed, the other event doesn't increase or decrease their status. Guess you didn't write the numbers for the events after day 30(something like that day?) BTW, love the story, passive Bella is something new. Can't wait for the last update!!!!
is it possible to bring ana or alina on day 139, tried multiple ways but they dont come with..
No, it's currently not possible, but there might be a pleasant surprise in the near future regarding Ana and Alina.
Huh. The game randomly skipped to day 139 and ended with me apparently moving out. i didnt get any events after ~Day 20 til 30ish when the time skip happened. i assume i lost but idk why, trust was positive on all family members :thonk:
u need to also corrupt them, ex. after rachel sees ur penis, go after and knock to have start masterbath scene.
i was able to get all 3 sis, mom, riley, iris, adriana to the island on day 139. use this
https://workupload.com/pdf/Yggm42dQ
This game is messed up my sleep schedule, it's so addicting. Btw I got few endings and the best one is when I got Susan, Rachel, and Bella at the same time but I lost Liza though, is it possible to get all 4 of them at the same time?
Yooo SAME, trying again later, and there goes my sleep time.
yep, that is exactly how it goes.
Sorry for giving you sleepless nights, but I'm happy that you're enjoying yourselves. ;)
It was worth it, I finally got 4 of them at the same time. Thanks for the game though :)
the five some is worth it
Oh don't worry, I bring Iris too.
Just finished the game for the first time and tbh I stayed up all night. WOW these are some well written stories. However, is it possible to have Liza love you? I tried many combinations and quite running out of options to choose. Again, thank you for this game the plot is amazing and I enjoy every second of it. ( Well, except for Broody’s hobby and mrs.Steel of course)
Thanks RoyKaiii, really glad you enjoyed it! Liza is also available as a romance option in the game, so you might have missed her.
Hummm, might as well try again tonight. Good luck on ur new project!
Fantastic game, had me sitting up until 3:30am just to see more of the story. And to look for alternative finishes.
P.s I leave for work at 6:30am, so it was a long day.
Keep up the great work.
Wow, that's some dedication right there. ;) Thanks for the kind words!
The new updates never fail to impress me hahaha its like i got new reading hobbies brilliants work ever good luck on next project look forward to it 😁😊
Thanks Salmamiami! Hope you'll enjoy the last one when it drops in December.
Walla iam incredibly ecited right now hahahaha look forward for it